PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Nine

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Nine

For Regionals, the team pulls out all the stops. Drama, I-3

Masaharu didn't know about the others, but he'd had to catch Yukimura from falling more than once, while spotting for his "light" practices, and had to carry him back inside twice. He'd watched the frustration his captain could keep out of his voice but couldn't keep out of his eyes, and shuddered to think what it must be like.

Comments

[luminati.livejournal.com]

I'm just a random passerby, but I read through all the parts up so far and THIS IS AMAZING. To avoid quoting everything back at you, um, I'll just say that your characterization is spot-on and I like the way the other Rikkai members are very much there without stealing the spotlight away from Niou and Yagyuu. ( That and the end of Part 8... *is still laughing about that* )

It fits very well into canon, and I very much want to read the next part. ^ ^

[branchandroot]

Welcome by, and thank you! Good to hear you've enjoyed it!