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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-06-20 10:59 pm
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PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Seven

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Seven

Disaster strikes for the whole team. Drama with Angst, I-4

After such a golden autumn, no one expected what happened in the heart of winter.

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[identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com 2004-06-21 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
the chill of Yagyuu's hands when Masaharu folded them around a can of coffee.

Affectionate!Niou emmergeth! I really like the way this fic is moving along. I'm also extremely impressed by how fast the parts are coming out

And our Sei-chan...now it's Sanada's turn to be such a gwumpy bear. But I'm extremely pleased with Jackal's line (*pretending it's your present to me* ^___^). Hasn't anyone noticed how Sanada is pratically the coach of Rikkai? I don't see no bench coach nowhere. I imagine the pressure much fall so heavily on Sanada and he still remains so whee!extremely sweet on his buchou.

(♥ Notice the extreme use of the word "extremely". XD)

But tragedy hits Rikkai! O___O

[identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com 2004-06-21 09:34 am (UTC)(link)
{absently corrects} 'there isn't any bench coach anywhere' and, no, there wouldn't be, would that? Not after Yukumura's little "chat" previously ^.^;; And somehow, I don't see Sanada welcoming that person back into the fold, do you?
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[personal profile] branchandroot 2004-06-22 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
It *is* my present to you! I try to keep my best readers happy, so I made sure to bring our dear Jackal in, even if he is usually the quiet type. He's definitely the most stable of them all. ^_^;

*points to Andrea* What she said; I did consider reminding everyone about how Yukimura had run off the teacher attached to the tennis club, but none of the characters paid him any mind at all anymore, and I couldn't make it sound natural. *pets Sanada* Poor, over-responsible dear.
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[identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, more Jackal. We'll break him yet. ^_^

I don't agree. A school like Rikkaidai is bound to have more then one couch. St. Rudolph has several coaches (although Mizuki likes to serve as bench coach, which is perfectly fine), so I would expect schools like Hyotei and Rikkai to have other supervisors. It really wouldn't do to have just Atobe or just Sanada controlling all those people in their schools of hugeness.

But...it's artistic liscense and I will leave it at that. *pets Sanada too* ^___^v
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