PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Six

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Six

Niou has an idea for a trick. Drama with Peculiar Romance, I-3

Yagyuu moved forward, fingers trailing ever so lightly over Masaharu's wrist in passing. Masaharu suppressed his reaction, sternly, but couldn't hold back a grin. Who would have thought that Yagyuu would be an incorrigible tease?

Comments

[gingaktb.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, and I mean wow. ^^ That was a wonderful read. I love the Sanada's headstrong, almost anal approach to being the best, Yukimura's obvious strength and sense of humor... I think I can see the characters grow a bit as you go on.

And don't get me started on Niou and Yagyuu. The fact that you make them complimentary opposites and build on that through a not so subtle relationship is brilliant.

I really like how this story is coming out. :D

[branchandroot]

*glows* Thank you! Getting the characters to grow is what I'm aiming for; good to know it's coming through.

*giggles* Yukimura is ending up more impish than I was expecting; it's fun.