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PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Six

Fic post from my archive.

Niou has an idea for a trick. Drama with Peculiar Romance, I-3

Yagyuu moved forward, fingers trailing ever so lightly over Masaharu's wrist in passing. Masaharu suppressed his reaction, sternly, but couldn't hold back a grin. Who would have thought that Yagyuu would be an incorrigible tease?

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{laughing like a...jackal? and jumping around the apartment in delight, unmindful of the occassional coughing fits} Oh! {breathless, HUGE grin} this was great! absolutely &superb&! I loved it! loved it! LOVED it! Hee hee hee! {claps happily} oh, oh, let's see!

back to the top! Sanada and Atboe--now, suddenly I get a glimmering of why there seems to be a fare share of Sana-Atobe fic stories out there. Makes sense. {nodsnods} Still... Tis something those boys would do. Chase each other in a 'civilized' rivallry dance.... Ah, but Yukimura knows how to handle his second, doesn't he?

{grins} and then, revelations... and suddenly the Trickster realizes he's fallen into one of his own tricks. Ah, but Yukimura is so awesome how he gently breaks the news, ne? Ah, but you also gave us some foreshadowing of the switch to come right there--and that was excellently exicuted, my dear. Yes, if Niou had to, he *could* keep his cool, his control for Yagyuu, ne?

Mmm...damn... {stretchs} tongue bath! tee hee hee... you're so *cruel* leaving the readers to do all the imaginings ^.^;;; 'm lazy... They *do* sort of resemble each other, but... yeah, it's the hair... *how* to explain why Yagyuu has longer hair? or do they tuck it up somewhere? It would be fairly easy to just add a tail clip for Niou's pony &leash&, but... hn... Saa... {grins}

So, Akaya caught on, huh? Did Sanada *not* and that's why he was a bit grumpy? Yukimura is such a tease himself...Mmm... ah, but Niou was able to learn a lot, wasn't he, from his tryst as Yagyuu, not only about his partner and his teammates, but about himself, too... Should truly prove...enlightening....

Mmm... another lovely wonderful scrumptious part! I'm hoping sunday will prove very productive indeed, since I am most anxious for more, as always! ^.^v

Well, word has it that, at some point, Sanada beat Atobe, and I knew that, at last year's Regionals, Rikkai played Hyoutei in the finals. So I put those together and settled on this; it seemed reasonable.

*grins* I delight in being cruel. How else would 'Haru-chan's pov come so easily?

And, yeah, Sanada didn't catch it this time around. *giggles* He's just way too serious.

Onward to the angst and comfort-smut!

^_^V

all fanfic authors have a hint of cruelty in them... it's just some are more willing than others to admit it, ne? {sparkles}

Saaa.. I was kinda hoping part 7 would be posted already, but oh well. I guess I'll have to try and pretend to be a good and patient girl, ne? ^.^v

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