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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2011-10-14 02:37 pm

[Fic] It’s Just That Any One of Us Is Half Without Another One Is You – Chapter Twelve

Cross-post from my archive.

Fandom/Arc: Avalanche, Naruto
Characters/Pairings: Chiyo, Gaara, Haruno Sakura, Hatake Kakashi, Kankurou, Maito Gai, Temari, Uchiha Sasuke, Uzumaki Naruto
Summary: Gaara is revived, and Naruto and Sakura take Sasuke home to recover.
Meta: Drama, Angst, Fluff, Light Porn, I-5
Wordcount: 5931

Sasuke didn't know what he wanted to say until he heard the words, "I really loved my brother," coming out of his mouth. Sakura took in a quick breath at that and wrapped her arms around him. Sasuke was glad for that; it kept the shaking in his stomach from taking his whole body. "I loved him," he said again, slowly, painfully. "And then he turned into... that."

Read: It's Just That Any One of Us Is Half Without Another One Is You - Chapter Twelve

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[personal profile] mitsuhachi 2011-10-14 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
If Naruto was sometimes his voice, maybe he was Naruto’s history—all the things Naruto should have been taught, as the son of the Fourth, but never had been. I read the first clause and went "hee!" and then I read the rest and I d'awwed hard. When Naruto is hokage, Sasuke is going to be pretty indispensable dealing with the noble clans, isn't he?

...and then there was like, an entire rest-of-the-chapter of uchiha angst. O.O Hello there, that was my heart. D: I liked what you did with the shrine, and how Sasuke had been afraid both of it being the same and of it being too different. And the domestic stuff-houses and babies and packing and whatnot--makes a really nice contrast with the intense action in the last few chapters.