PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Four

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Four

Niou and Yagyuu settle into their partnership. Drama, I-3

"You do realize," Masaharu murmured, "that you can be polite while still smashing them into jelly."

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

Okay, lj hate me. It has ate my comment twice now *cries of frustration*. Anyways, I waited till I finished my exams to sink my teeth into this piece and oh my goodness it is delicious. I love you and your MadSkillz.

Yagyuu is dangerous (explosive, so much anger), and Niou is so manipulative (so much control, and oh so dangerous with that control). The dynamics between the two is amazing. So dangerous, so tense, so sharp. Niou is playing a juggling act, and one little mistake and Yagyuu dear is going to let his anger focus all on Niou. But that is what so damn fascinating about the two. Also, the way that Yagyuu is beginning to trust Niou is delicious because the underlying sense of danger is still present. Wonderful.

Love how the rest of the team react to the two, Marui is a smart, smart me to realize that being anywhere near the two when Yagyuu let loose, and Niou goes bouncy is detrimental to ones’ health. Love.

And now I come to Yukimura. You got his character down to a pat. Silk over steel. The determination, the talent, the sheer insight, and the knowledge of knowing when to use all three. I respect, love and fear the man. Oh, and the comment from Niou about protecting the strong. I SQUEEEEEEEEE! OMFG! I LOVE! WAHHHHHHHHHHH! The beginning stages of realization of LOVE!!!! Happiness!

Kirihara’s introduction was doen amazingly well, and the dynamics between him and the Power3 is so well done. Love. Cute, bratty younger brother indeed ^__^ And Possession is the way to go!!!

CAN’T wait for MORE!! LOVE! LOVE! LOVE!

*feed you truck after truck of truffles*

[branchandroot]

Yes, 'm. More is up. *scarfs up truffles*

Akaya is cute; he got such a raw deal in the anime matches. Though, yes, 138 redresses a good deal of that. *ruffles Akaya's hair while he sulks*

And congratulations on finishing exams! *snugs*