PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Four

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Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Four

Niou and Yagyuu settle into their partnership. Drama, I-3

"You do realize," Masaharu murmured, "that you can be polite while still smashing them into jelly."

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"Yanagi drove him absolutely frothing mad," Masaharu put in, "but the kid actually got one game off Sanada. The iron face unbent enough to look a tad impressed."

*pets elf* I imagine when they discovered li'l Kirikins it happened exactly like that. I'm having so much FUN with this fic! *turns into girlgoo* Then again I always do.

In this particular part, I really love your interpretation of Yagyuu's game. He's absolutely perfect in this fic, as are the rest of the characters and you've managed to stay on track in the plot. I've read many-a-fic that tend to go astray once new characters are introduced. But here Kirihara enters strong, stays, but leaves the story to the "main characters". I'm so glad you mention all of them too, at least once. ^^

And Yukimura = \^o^/ power to the people!

[branchandroot]

Power to the people! *V sign*

The Elf did make a fair bid at taking over the story, but I told him to wait for his own later on, and he seems to have settled down. Suggesting that I may let him make time with Sanada helped.

Oh, and Andrea wanted you to know about a horrible thought I had: Yukimura as Wendy (a la Peter Pan). I believe the exact phrase was "Wendy-esque, if Wendy kicked ass and took names". *shakes head* I just know Sei-nii-chan's gonna kill me for this.

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Well, well! Elf listens! Good job!

Oh hey, Andrea told me about that. Then you better check my LJ soon 'cause I already drew it and will be posting that picture soon. So soon! Rikkai Lost Boys! XDDDDDDDD

And Sei-nii-chan won't kill you but will smile and thank you for his lovely pale blue night gown! ^_^v